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Well done - a very successful piece. One of its great advantages is the crispness of the footage - your whiite balance is spot on - well done. Framing is also good in the main, especially your closer work.
You observe all 3 continuity tasks successfully - lots of good examples of MOAs, some of these a very complex involving more than two shots - so well done. Very original dialogue as well - amusing. A good varity of shot distances as well.
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Some of your S / RS framing is a little empty - you need to move in closer to fill the frame.
Blog at present is level 2. We expect and want you to get into level 4. Treat every post as a visual challenge - how can you best illustrate incorporating multi media format. Just writing a post is never acceptable.
A number of gaps - post production discussions on editing choices, evidence of you editing? planning (the monopoly money for instance), and so on.
Learn from these mistakes, together with the issues on framing.
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ReplyDeleteUnfortunately, your video does not play - please sort this out ASAP.
Well done - a very successful piece. One of its great advantages is the crispness of the footage - your whiite balance is spot on - well done. Framing is also good in the main, especially your closer work.
You observe all 3 continuity tasks successfully - lots of good examples of MOAs, some of these a very complex involving more than two shots - so well done. Very original dialogue as well - amusing. A good varity of shot distances as well.
To improve further
Some of your S / RS framing is a little empty - you need to move in closer to fill the frame.
well done.
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ReplyDeleteBlog at present is level 2. We expect and want you to get into level 4. Treat every post as a visual challenge - how can you best illustrate incorporating multi media format. Just writing a post is never acceptable.
ReplyDeleteA number of gaps - post production discussions on editing choices, evidence of you editing? planning (the monopoly money for instance), and so on.
Learn from these mistakes, together with the issues on framing.